Black Poetry : I Believed Him (Part II)

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  1. Danilyn

    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my secret is no longer safe
    he said he wouldn’t tell anybody
    but he did
    the fingers keep being pointed
    and whispers carry on behind my back
    the word on the street is that i am a freak
    i’ll do anything
    do anybody

    and it wasn’t true…

    i did it for him because he said
    he loved me
    that makes it different, doesn’t it?

    hey baby, can i call u sometime?

    hey girl, u shole is fine…

    hey sweet thang, u gone hook a brotha up?


    What?????

    the offers came in like I put out a whore resume

    all because

    I believed him…
     
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    Some brothas only mission in life is to misuse and abuse.....This is a very deep flow...
     
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    Keep revealing the games

    Would that every gullible woman would read your lines. I know for sure that many would be spared a lot of shame and heartache.
     
  4. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (continued from part I)...

    ...you have captured the very essence of one of
    the many life lessons we experience before &
    while growing into woman-hood... ( go to part III)
     
  5. poeticdelight

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    again

    thank you for sharing
     
  6. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aight!!
    Tyte!
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Danilyn,

    Good series...

    Movin' on...

    :heart:
    GQ
     
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    a blossoming flower...

    in the hands of the immature and inexperienced.

    sorry he did you that way.:(
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    a blossoming flower...

    in the hands of the immature and inexperienced.

    sorry he did you that way.:(
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    DA SO CALL MEN DO DIS **** AND MAKE IT HARD FOR DA REAL
    MEN .......BUT LAY IT OUT COZ DA WORLD NEED TO KNOW!
    SIS..... U STR8 BRINGING DA TRUTH
     
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