Quiet Poetry Lounge : I believe

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  1. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Throwing myyself
    under the train.....
    Diving to your feet
    Why, has it been?
    I do not understand
    Yet I do.....so well
    Why does m mind seem....unable

    I know....I should not do
    Or maybe I know I should
    I find out so many things
    But, don;t know if I should
    How am I at being a child?
    Am I no good?

    Jerking Myself
    Standing up with the sky
    I will not slumber
    No, not at all...lQQ
    lQQn, I will be strong


    I apologize for before,
    I feel weak
    I try and stand tall
    But do not see a tweak
    This is not what I initially wanted
    I want it
    But I dont wanted
    I am not a good child.....

    Would you not like if I cry?
    I know it can't be a bad thing....
    But would it take longer....
    To make you smile?
    Would I have to keep quiet..
    for a while?
    You know I would
    I just want to be a child
    A good Child

    I want to be the right child
    Not being wrong
    I DONT know
    I feel wrong
    Especially after I say that
    Help
    Help
    WHY dont I stay strong?
    Because I am not a good child?
    Maybe that's why.....
    To make me strong.....

    I CANT STAND THIS
    I am sorry
    I am doing good
    I am sad
    I WANT to be mad
    this is all I have....
    Is this all I have?
    KNowing my Destiny is great
    Previously denying...my fate
    FAKE drew me
    Inward I'd take
    The price, I make
    I made
    It's mine
    it's time
    STOP!
    STOP!
    STOP!
    I will be okay....
    who am I talking to....
    I prolly can't even hear you....

    Sad again
    This has GOT to end
    I hope you are putting up with me
    I am one buzzing bee
    I just want to be free
    and be
    Your child?
    Am I still you child?
    Am I still a Child?
    Am I still your....good Child?

    I believe
     
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    sweet as ever, softly one would say "yes" for thee is thy goodness of child
    keep believing.
     
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    :em4600:Thank You Bro:em3200:
     
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    Through wrong decisions and right, not perfect but in his sight, a good child. Enjoyed the fluid flow of this, poetess.
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You Sis....SOmetimes, we just need to hear it again:)
    BLESS YOU
     
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    Hi PLATINUMILLITY1
    This was a very cool poem.
    I enjoyed how your poems reflects
    on how we have to keep trying, and not give up.
    Very nice read sis

    Peace~N~Love
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Sis
    That we must...without the Reflecton....we could never see.
    I really appreaciate that:)
    BLESS
     
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