Black Poetry : I Await The Day....

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  1. MzMelanie2u2

    MzMelanie2u2 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I await the day you walk through that door, for that shall be the day you take my life by storm. And on that night I won’t decline to let you fill my bottle with your new wine. And as you hold my hands and sweep away my tears as well as my fears, and you promise me its going be alright, there with you ill lay. In your arms, for you will hold my destiny in your touch and as we bless and caress each other with a passion so great, ill pray to the stars above that there with you I’d stay. And that we would become a never ending story, and that my heart would forever feel your glory. But until that arrives, ill count down the minutes hours, and seconds, for I await the day.​
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well said da day is near for thy Queeneth
    very nicely pose'd sis.
     
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    the best things come to those who wait. nice drop
     
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    Many have waiting for that precious day to arrive, and it will again...such a warm feeling in this.
     
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    MzMelanie2u2 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANK YOU THANK YOU...!

    OMG...! ! !...I just want to thank each and every last one of you for all your love. believe it or not, ( and trust me this will be hard to believe ) I just started writing poetry two nights ago. I was inspired by a very good friend of mine Chad aka "Hisili"...but i guess its like i heard one talk show host/comedian say once,..." A poet and didnt even know it "...lol...So from the depths of my very heart, I want to say THANK YOU, for the acceptance and all your love...and like i like to say,..."KEEP EM COMIN"...!​
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    Indeed poet...you have a natural rhythm
    let the poetry take over and speak through you...
    the waters of word have now been disturbed...
    I can only begin to imagine the river that shall
    come forth...

    this was a heartfelt scribe...
    love this line "I won’t decline to let you fill my bottle with your new wine"

    Write on poet...Write on...
    Sage
     
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