Black Poetry : I Aspire

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by arthur1210, Jan 20, 2004.

  1. arthur1210

    arthur1210 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If her objective is to entice me
    I do acknowledge, I am impressed
    The way she move excites me
    Thus, I feel need to see it expressed
    Looking at her does delight me
    For, she truly has been blessed
    I deliberate about it nightly
    Thus, it’s defining my quest

    To date I’ve spoken subtle and politely
    The depth my desire not confessed
    But her exquisiteness has enticed me
    So I’ll make certain my wishes are addressed
    Wanting to experience sensation she’ll provide me
    Because I’m tired of trying to guess
    And nothing more could delight me
    Than knowing the delights she does possess

    All I need is a simple invitation
    Visit her home as her guest
    I’ll make her aware of my fascination
    To fulfill her every request
    It’s my wish to enrich our relations
    And, time I’m willing to invest
    I’m sure I find the proper motivation
    I’m sure she’ll settle for nothing less

    I’ll bring an abundance of imagination
    My advances will be at their best
    She’ll know the extent the infatuation
    With the tenderness in my embrace and caress
    It is my resolved to show no hesitation
    While exploring any ideas she may suggest
    I aspire to see to her gratification
    Far more than these words could ever expres​
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very very nicely said poet
    lovin ya flow
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You aim to impress, and have. Nicely written.
     
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    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    if I were you object of affection you'd definitely win me over with that. great write
     
  5. arthur1210

    arthur1210 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you all for your kind words
     
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    This was an exquisite journey of the heart, mind & soul
    love the sense of anticipation you created
    ...I couldn't wait to get to the end...
    and start all over again...
     
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