Black Poetry : i ask of you.....

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you ask me to come to you…
    cant wait to get there…
    near you….the passion….
    Flows so smooth….
    for I need you in my life…
    my stress is over coming…
    I need your comfort…
    And the love I get from you
    You ask me to come to you
    I want to be there…near you
    To hear your heart beat…
    And over come all this stress…
    Relax me baby…
    Just hold me…
    Sing to me
    Read to me….
    You ask me to come to you
    I want to be there….
    But for now…well
    Know I need you
    To be in your arms to hear your words
    To un-wine with you…..
    Baby by chance…..
    Can you come to me….
    I need you…..i am tired
    And I need you not far..
    If only for one night….
    Babe I need you…..
    Come to me….
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow... dis was heated passion flowin and heart felt
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for da love on dis....
    Angel
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    hmmmmmmmmmmm

    Who you calling fo? :D :lol:

    He better get there quick before something happens... ;) :lol:

    Very nice...well done...the passion is felt. Keep it up, Sista.

    :toast:
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Girl whoever u callin' betta hurry up and find u.
    But i'm lovin this, 4real.
     
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    Girl your emotion is jumping off of this page
    send that brother to expedia.com and get
    him on a plane fast...

    this was so emotive...
     
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    Emotionally expressed, this can be felt for miles on end.
     
  8. BaduX

    BaduX Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this hea is deep... i felt this one
    GOD BLESS :toast:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol you need :help: :lol:
    thankz for da love.....
    ummmmm whats gonna happen?????smh
     
  10. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol he found me lol
    thanks fo da read