Black Poetry : I Ask For...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GQ, Mar 22, 2001.

  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Within me is where you'll be
    I ask for your heart with

    dew-drop like

    melodic queries

    Do you love me?

    Do you need me?

    Do you want me?

    Answer me not; at least not yet
    Wait for the rain to start its'

    romantic downpour

    over hypnotic answers

    Yes, I love you more than I can say!

    Yes, I need you because I am you!

    Yes I want you for you arouse my desire!

    Spinning out of control in my mind's eddy
    I ask for your mind with

    tear filled eyes

    that search my heart and yours

    Do you see me for the man I am?

    Do you feel me with all your womanly charm?

    Do you care deeply when you think of me?

    Answer me not; at least not yet
    Pause for the sun to shine its'

    adoring rays

    on your pleasurable responses

    Yes, I see my love as he who lives permanently inside of me;
    therefore I see you as you are

    Yes, my womanly charm is truly felt when your heart beats
    in tune with my own

    Yes, my caring is deeply meshed with our profound karma
    as I always think of you

    Breathing you in and sustained by your passion
    I ask for your soul with

    numinous silence

    laced with a still peace

    Do you fit into my equation of what 1 + 1 equals?

    Do you covet my sacred kiss that endears our bond?

    Do you really know how much I love you?

    Answer me not; at least not yet
    Linger a while longer for the snow to blanket its'

    cascade of calm white

    over your quiet interpretation

    Yes, the sum of your heart and mind equals the answer to our lover's essence

    Yes, your kiss fulfills our promise as we fall in love; our connection is forever

    Yes, I knew how much you loved me when you looked at me and said it from your soul

    As I ask for your heart, mind, and soul, I devote these same three requisites;

    for I am in love with you...
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ~

    So sensual & passionate, this piece is!!

    So what date & time shall I meet you at the alter?
    Wait...
    "answer me not -just yet" :)

    Let me read some more of your scribes
    before "we" say - "I do"!! ha ha ha

    Luvin' this piece to pieces!!
    Keep it coming...
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ...

    very well done!...
    it's spectacular.

    my first thought was... WOW!!

    Peace...
    Sunshyne~
     
  4. 8th wonder

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    dayummmmmm!!! That was so tyght!!!! I see you.....
     
  5. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ladies,

    Glad ya feelin' ma :love: all up on this one!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
  6. Afridancr

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    Wow! Love can't get much better than this!!

    Lovin' ya flow always!

    Afri
     
  7. Reason

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    **** bruh!!!

    This hea need to stay at the top!!! ****... all I can do is shake ma head dog cause my words wont do this one justice.

    You remain at da top of the food chain!

    Madd Respect
    Reas
     
  8. PoeticMaster

    PoeticMaster Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    indeed i agree des hit the real spot
    ya on a hellva roll...flow on !
     
  9. Destee

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    the rain has started
    the sun is shining
    the snow has blanketed my heart
    all at the same time
    with romantic thoughts of you

    beautiful flow GQ

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  10. LISTERSCRIBIN'

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    beautifully said, dear poet...yes, indeed. for she's a lucky lady. does she know that???