Black Poetry : I am........

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Froggy1, Aug 16, 2005.

  1. Froggy1

    Froggy1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Im the child hate made
    my words are sharper than a samurais blade
    when i spit from my lungs puts holes in you like bullets from guns
    I bring more heat than two suns
    Im right here for you to hate
    go ahead cause in my hands i have your fate
    im something few understand
    im always firey never bland
    I always have my foes on the run
    my viciousness when unleashed is second to none
    on your hatred i feast
    your ignorance feeds the beast
    people fear what they cant conquer
    thats how i became a monster
    I use to be a normal child
    until i saw how the world lets our laws be defiled
    and i never noticed
    or even focused
    on the facts
    that power equals paperstacks
    thats how the real crooks slip through the cracks
    now im wishing i had known this from the getgo
    but my knowledge of this came too slow
    thats what got me frustrated
    thats why i feel anyone who doesnt realize this should be berated
    cause cant you see?
    that the plan is to dehumanize
    and suprise
    then let you uprise
    and be crushed when you bust
    turn your flesh into dust
    so go ahead
    fill me full of hate
    so i can leave the streets blood red
    and my psychotic tendencies
    will reveal all seven degrees
    of evil
    and show you the true meaning of keeping it real
    which is very laughable
    and fallable
    cause thats something few can do without
    a doubt
    cause cash cars and fame
    will poison any heroes mainframe
    and pervert
    and hurt
    his ideals
    and make him sellout just to get some meals
    I mean its sad and at this rate,
    theres gonna be more like me
    children made of hate
     
  2. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Deep drop Froggy1 :welldone:
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Read some of the rules of power and how to abuse others with it!

    The 48 Laws of Power
    by Robert Greene
    :danger:

    http://www.amazon.com/gp/reader/0140280197/ref=sib_dp_pt/102-2617381-2872968#reader-link

    Get others to do the work for you, but always take the credit. Use their wisdom, knowledge and leg work to further your cause.

    Make others dependant on you. For their happiness and prosperity.

    Use selective honesty and generosity to disarm your victims.

    Crush your enemy totally. Crush him not only in body but in sprit.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You released a chasm of thoughts here poet. We need to be able to take others fear of us and use it for our own gain. Intriguing write poet.
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm not used to hearing this kind of flow from you but I most certainly can not and will not hate you for it. It takes courage to tell the truth lke that and i do believe that's something you posess. I can only encourage you to do you first and the world that hates you will continue to fuel your poetic fire thus making you greater than before.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    strong deep scribe from within .........