Black Poetry : <<<I.AM>>>

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by plainrhythm, Jul 30, 2005.

  1. plainrhythm

    plainrhythm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *i have no idea if this is a poem or... whateva it is, i'm sorry if i put it in the wrong place*

    the love which hates to live.
    a conflict within the unborn child of the broken pasts.
    im the prostitute life never f#@*ed with, the life
    that prostitutes could've accomplished.

    an angel of eternity, an eternal angel in a forever universe,
    an infinite possibility twisting impossible stories like
    Shakespeare cramping Einstein's style.
    i'm a friend but don't trust me, i'm loyal to disloyalty,
    the moth that never flew to the flame
    but watched the butterfly flutter - by and burn its wings instead of mine.
    the failing dream that never failed to dream.

    I AM, a distant voice within... a drug you've had enough
    of but kept taking more than enough of.

    WHO ARE YOU?
    a figment of reality in my surreal world, an invention in my mind
    that only serves the purpose of entertainment.

    I AM, the creator of insanity, queen of a jungle that could've
    existed if humanity had not distroyed it.
    the puppeteer in your Sesame Street debut...

    I Am, the one who was sent... to ease your state of mind...

    *feel free to add on*
     
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    AHMOSE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am the destroyer of time
    Electrocuting clocks from your mind.

    I am alive yet I talk to you from the grave
    I act so bad I dont know how to misbehave

    I am the lighting before the thunder
    Living in America still in the land of downunder
     
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    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THIS LINE SCARED ME.. BECAUSE.. IF U WERE SENT TO EASE MY MIND,... O MY.. **RUNS TO A HIDING PLACE.. DEEP IN THE EARTHS ORFACE** :laugh: :wave:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am the one who
    saves you from disgrace
    then returns you to that
    same exact time and place
    to see if you actually learned
    how to save face
    I am the unexplained force that makes
    time stand still when you're stressed
    and causes time to fly when you're
    chillin and getting some much needed rest
    I am the opposite of what you've often expected,
    and an invisible stumbling block in life's quest

    This was a deep exploration poet
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nice drop...................