Black Poetry : i am

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by true love, Sep 9, 2003.

  1. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is something i wrote a while ago...i hope you all are feeling it

    i am peaceful and still
    like daisies in the morning breeze
    i am restless and demanding
    sort of hateful even
    i am not condescending
    yet i am a recluse
    with closed arms
    and legs
    a heart with cobwebs for blood
    a lung with dust for oxygen
    i am not a play thing
    a toy for amusement
    i am a sharp knife
    in a drawer full of forks
    do not stick your hand in without looking
    do not point me the wrong way
    do not play with me
    like a white ninja sword
    pretty
    but willing to kill you
    w
    i
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    l
    i
    n
    g
    2
    kill
    u
     
  2. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like it... :)

    Very straight to the point. You need a hug? :heart:
     
  3. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hodee as a matter of fact i do! lol i knew you would feel me. thanks sweety.
     
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    afrostotle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I dig what you're expressing here! We all have that side to us, I feel we are a people with more positive energy than negative, unfortunately for us, our collective trials & tribulations have been such that we need that protective and reactive alter-ego inorder that we remain "Hater-Free"

    I needed this like a wang needs hotsauce..........ONE LOVE
     
  5. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you afrostotle...you summed it up like a blessing for me. thanks for feeling me. LOL glad to be your hotsauce.
     
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    i really enjoyed reading this....keep on flowin girl
     
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    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you mzblkangel
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you are welcome...
     
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    :grouphug:<~theres that hug that you need....:lol: tight flow
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaa!! da morning embrace of a hug
    and know today is gonna be just fine.....tyte i feel u