Black Poetry : I Am Yours...

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  1. MzMelanie2u2

    MzMelanie2u2 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It’s all in the touch of your sweet caress
    And in the sound of your enviable voice
    That makes my very soul feel faint.
    Whenever I enter into your presence, your energy
    flows from within you with such power,
    It seems to captivate me and entangle me.
    I have no choice but to love you.
    This attraction that presents itself every time
    we are in each others company seems to grow
    Stronger and stronger as the days and weeks and months go by.
    What is this karma that you possess, its so
    Consuming. Though I try to fight the lustful
    Desires that I have obtained, I now make the conscious decision
    To give it my all. So here am I, with my white flag lifted, Letting you know I totally surrender
    Open and vulnerable, I plead for you to take all of
    me and have your way
    For I Am Yours…



    Its nice to be back, I Missed Yall Alot...~*~SMOOCHES~*~
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's so nice to have you back too,
    I enjoyed reading your "desires" ...and I'm sure he'll enjoy hearing them. thanks for sharing your inner soul.
     
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    Letting yourself be vulnerable, this was a tender scribe.
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    MzMelanie2u2

    wb, Sista. This is a beautiful piece.

    :thanks: for sharing.

    :toast:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome home sis wow!
    tyte drop indeed flow head
     
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