Quiet Poetry Lounge : I am who I am....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blakverb, Jun 18, 2001.

  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am....
    who I am...
    who eye am...
    who.................eye.....
    am...
    .
    .
    .
    .
    I think I saw me mirror
    re- flect - ing
    on the palette
    of LIFE
    .
    .
    .
    SAY - ing
    in spoken word tongue
    "who gives a **** what the
    other man think" for it is
    my IN - TRO - SPEC - TION
    that teaches me LESSons
    about
    SELF
    .
    .
    .
    and eye am..........................
    so deeply trapped
    IN
    MY
    SE
    LF
    TH
    AT
    .....I am oblivious to
    bull sh.................IT
    bantering about
    the
    blak
    ness
    that
    I
    RE - SIDE
    IN
    and my residence is at an ADDress
    within my mind that protects me
    from external STRESS
    of critical words cause
    all the critics ain't gone LOVE
    ME
    SO
    WHY
    GI
    VE
    A
    DA
    MN
    .
    .
    .about thoughts I cannot/don't want to/
    or care to//////////RE
    ARRANGE
    when I can let misguided words
    of the thoughtless
    maim their energy
    .
    .
    .
    while mine RE sides free
    around ME suckling
    on vibes that are about
    my growth....................................
    and DE
    FLEC
    TING
    vibes that are about my
    DEATH......and choking
    the grass in my mental pastures
    so I can not feed off of
    SELF....and
    WHO
    EYE
    KNOW
    EYE
    AM.....another's
    man/WO
    man's thoughts
    will not devour me....

    I am.....
    WHO EYE am...
    that's all I'll be...
    .
    .
    .
    not CAR
    ING
    what other's
    judgments may B
    cause there is
    ON
    LY
    1
    true judge

    and man is not it.

    (c)2001 blakverb
     
  2. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My dearest blak

    You TRULY KNOW Who I AM!!!!!!

    :heart: ya and I thank you for this...

    I couldn't have said it better myself! :D
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My RoYaL bLAkNeSs....

    Preach da word Poet!... Preach da word!! :)

    per usual... you are keepin' it foreva tyght.
    i am neva disappointed when i allow my mental to
    entwine with yours... keep doin' your thang sweetie!

    OneLove.
    Queen SunShyne~ :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    MOST DEF

    U KNOW WHOM U BE AS I KNOW ME
    DES IS IT ..VERB MAN PREACH THESE WORDS
    POET SAY IT LIKE IT TIS.......:toast:
     
  5. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nuff said....This be tight!!
     
  6. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My peeps...I am who I am...and I thank you and am blessed because you are who you are.

    one love,blak