Black Poetry : I Am Void......

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  1. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    now im dying inside
    i need a remedy for despair
    cause everything i did,everything i cared
    for,was never there......

    a life i made
    is my everything,my love ,my hope...
    but she took it all away with 1 stroke
    i guess thats the price i paid
    for lusting with a joke......

    i could simply pull out now,
    and let the courts take her...
    all rooks,theyre all crooks,
    cant give her to the father that made her....

    to the father that loves her,
    she knows she brings him joy...
    so she foils the plot
    and instead,leaves him with VOID....

    i am void....
    i am void....

    i am a whistle in the wind....
    here the toot for a minute longer,
    she's evil in its purest form ,
    she is the 'I' in sIn.....

    im a go thru with it,
    and im a try to win.....
    but Today aint nuthin promised
    to a man in this type of pred-i-cament....

    i am void...
    i am void....

    laughin at the masses of ignorant men...
    who got away with sin of leavin theyre kin...
    i wannabe there for mine,
    to complete my heart,
    to complete my mind
    why am i one of the few who tried??
    sometimes i feel like commiting suicide...

    yall who have a young one,
    who look up to you......
    do me a favor,be there alwayz,
    prosper ,give em hope ,but please,
    dont be a fool.....

    for i am void.......
    i am void....

    wishin i was you.......
     
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    Wow, I was feeling this piece..very emotional...wow. :bowdown: thanks for sharing.
     
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    This piece cuts you deep. Good concept.
    Thanks for sharing.
     
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    Lurk babe, you never cease to amaze! Great scribe!
     
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    Great flow Lurk

    More ways to break your heart. Punish you and tear things apart. Love transcends barriers. Your realtionship with the young ones will survive. No your not the only one. To take this despairing ride. It will leave you feeling miserable. Get thru with it, demand your rights. To see and by their side.

    Selfish strokes. Of a pen to choke. Is common when sin comes in. Drop the "S" put a "W" in it's place and do what you can to Win. Stay strong.
     
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    My redemption lies in the fact that i am void...
    Void of all pain...
    Void of all gain...
    Troubled,
    To say the least.

    Hey LURK, I love your work! :picture:
     
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    It's great to read you again, LURK. This is amazing.
     
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    this was deep
    stirring with emotion
    but with an undertow of determination
    and overwhelming love for that little one
    and that's what truly counts
    Touching flow...
    if this is real, I wish you all the best
    and many, many prayers on your behalf

    Powerful write!
    peace and love
    Sage
     
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    I felt the pain in this, wishing you could be there for her, it comes through crystal clear in your words. Flow on.
     
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    Re: Void

    I feel your pain but you are not void or alone . Put it all in God's hands and let him be your pilot through these hard times. Keep your head up and Stay blessed through Him.
     
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