Black Poetry : I am the Sea

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Dior Robynsonne, Apr 17, 2004.

  1. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sea-like
    dark
    deep
    calm on
    the surface
    currents
    underneath.
    A Myriad
    of colors,
    hues of blues,
    greens, blacks and
    coral,
    charcoal browns
    and gilded golds and
    tarnished silvers.
    Exotic,
    quixotic
    intense and chaotic.
    Liquid
    cool
    smooth
    vast
    earth-bound
    and celestial sound.
    Stygian
    and crisp
    springs,
    rivers and
    cool shivers.
    I deliver.
    My purity and
    complexity
    flows from my
    disposition;
    reminiscent of the
    deep, calm, and unpredictable
    sea.

    Copyright 2004 Anno Domini/ "Earth's Wynne" Publishing
    ~Dior X. Robynsonne
     
  2. Earthly Allure

    Earthly Allure Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    runs hand in hand with being identified as the moon. One side you see and one side you don't.
     
  3. PositiveMindset

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    Vey nice.

    Ofttimes calm, sometimes furious.

    Unpredictability is what makes an artist an artist.
     
  4. Earthly Allure

    Earthly Allure Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you so much for your love. That is exactly how it is a lot of times.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was tyte scribing here love how u did it.......
     
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    Loved this descriptive verse, those colorful images were just pretty, and I also liked the mention of conflict in what the eyes can see.
     
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    flowing within the realm smooth just like the sea flowing
    flowing furiously a mixture of pleasure this one can send ya places
    tight drop i really enjoyed the scribe......
     
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    Dior Robynsonne
    You have exhibit a wonderful portrait of the sea in your flow, and I am always draw toward the water, yes your flow has indeed enter my mental, with a smooth ease,
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this flow is sooo...u.....lol....i loved it...another masterpeice by...dior/eartly allure...
    :heart:
    -story
     
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    Welcome, Welcome

    :wave: :wave: :wave: Welcome Home :wave: :wave: :wave:
    I love your floE, keep um droppin ok :wink: