Black Poetry : I am Sex

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HighEmme, Nov 11, 2002.

  1. HighEmme

    HighEmme Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I wrote this when I was in High School. My English teacher gave us a format to follow and told us to pick a feeling, emotion or act to personify. So this is what I came up with...Enjoy

    I Am Sex

    I am the center of pleasure
    I wonder why I have so many people addicted to me
    I hear the sounds of fulfillment that I produce
    I want everyone to experience me
    I am Sex.

    I pretend to be a feeling that will embrace you forever
    I feel so good to the body soothing it's yearnings
    I touch the very deepest part of your intimacy
    I worry about my reprocussions
    I cry because often I am misused
    I am Sex.

    I understand that sometimes I hurt more than I help
    I say "I am pleasure within myself, you have to make me work."
    I dream of fulfilling fantasies of those to embarassed to say
    I try to make you feel wanted and satisfied
    I hope that you experience me in the most sensual way
    I am Sex.
     
  2. DaFlavaFul

    DaFlavaFul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    pretty good , if you were that good in high school ur probably better now!looking for more.
     
  3. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i am the user
    ...the abuser of you
    without self control
    i swim the rivers of
    flowing honey
    and taste the joys of
    ooohhhs
    and
    aaahhhs
    as sweet release overwhelms me
    and stars twinkle
    at the curling of my toes
    "can you find the hole?"
    i was never asked
    ...could never run out of gas
    along my journey of getting to know you
    the intimate folds of you
    I THINK I LOVE YOU

    THANK YOU.:)
     
  4. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    awww baller :love:

    this was very nice HighEmme

    keep writing :)

    one love

    pd
     
  5. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I think I luv U 2
     
  6. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i really like this poem.
    it's so true!! :spinstar: