Black Poetry : I am not a girl….I am a woman

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Growing into this woman
    Alive and true…
    Standing tall….not taking the fall
    I will fight this time
    Tired of all the bull…..
    Knowing who I am.
    And what I want!
    I don’t play games
    Don’t want to be caught in the middle.
    So are you really down
    Am I truly what you search for?

    I am not a girl but a woman
    With a heart
    Emotions on rise
    A soul of feelings
    Ready to release…

    But can you handle all that have come to be?

    I aint going with the flow…
    Been to long…
    Abused
    Used
    Hurt
    Cut inside…betrayed
    And let down….
    Either you do or you don’t…
    How ever it is
    Come true…I am not a girl
    I am a full-grown woman!

    Can you with stand the storm that is about to take place?

    I am not a girl…
    Shake it off pull your self-up
    Ready to go toe to toe
    For this aint no show…
    Coming real… exhale
    Because I am real
    No games
    No jokes
    Just real….
    I am not a girl
    Don’t play with me as such
    Be a man….if your love is true
    Its time to confess

    Look at me closely
    I am not a girl
    I am a woman
    A Queen wearing her shoes
    Its time for you to take your throne..
    No games of sort
    Not a lie to lead
    But true to who I am..

    So can you come real?

    Be that man I love and cherish
    As our ribs transform into one
    Can you….
    Because I am not going with the flow
    I am not a girl
    I am a woman
    A Black Queen
    Royal purple passion a gem of a rose
    One of a kind…true to who I am
    And what I want…
    I am not a girl….I am a woman

    See its time to wear the crown
    Are you up to the real woman in me?

    (C) 2004
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    not a girl but woman well said sistah
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks Rich for the love on dis..:kiss:
     
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    Grown folks fess up, they don't have time for games and such. So true.
     
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    AND A VERY WELL SPOKEN WOMEN YOU ARE...........WONDERFUL POEM SISTA .............................DIGGIN THIS :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:
     
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    It couldn't have been said any better than that...because when one realize what a "Woman, Queen, Warrior and Friend" they have...and don't act on it...is not a wise person.
    Wonderful piece, I like where you took this and surely I can relate to all that you said.
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    MzBlkAngel...

    Only a man can be with the type of woman you are.

    :thanks: for bringing it.

    :toast:
     
  8. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks watzinaname

    thank you my brother THEONE for the love and support :love:

    queentswana..^5 sis thanks for the love...

    Monetary..what can i say...but ya right... :wink:

    thanks fam
    Peace
    Angel
     
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