Black Poetry : I am I really

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  1. UniqueOne

    UniqueOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am I really???


    It’s okay you may not be ready to hear all of this
    But I have that pointless
    Feeling once again
    Overwhelming every muscle with in
    I’m wondering why? Am I really that sick mother?
    Who exact am I
    Have I changed that much
    That I can’t recognize myself
    Or is it just the depression playing games

    But I can’t grasp an understanding of these things
    Seems like an excuse to me

    Is it or am I really that sick that I can’t comprehend what’s reality and what’s fictional
    Am I failing to see the signs?
    That I am
    Or am not
    losing my mind

    I feel as if I really don’t care any more
    I just want to give up tired out
    No more energy left to shout for help
    From now on my thoughts will be kept to my self
    :confused:
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very heartfelt...love it...
     
  3. PurpleMoons

    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    Nooooo! dont keep it to yourself. shes listening ,I'm listening. And this is heart felt. Burst of emotions they come and they go. We all feel like this sometimes. Besides I love your flow.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    what u feel is so real
    but it's not da deal delt
    dis emotional blaze will pass
    look which ya cometh from
    face da hills before u i hear u
    feeling u
    no ! u can't lay down and stop
    no movement no flow comes to roit
    ya feelings is reality we all face the demons
    yet we bounce wit faith
    i see the trace in ya face dis vision of quest
    babe just relax and rest come back strong !

    well felt
     
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