Black Poetry : I Am Here

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by pztvnrg, Apr 2, 2001.

  1. pztvnrg

    pztvnrg Active Member MEMBER

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    there are moments when i know
    you've let me in the places
    you think are barren
    because
    you feel nothing
    as i step inside of you
    the bullies bombard me
    warning...
    and
    i
    forge
    neither afraid
    nor intimidated
    my presence
    nullifies their existence
    and they know extinction
    is on the horizon
    so i sit
    next to the beat of you
    enjoying me
    here
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    AND

    IN EVERY BEAT OF ENJOYMENT
    I TELL YA WITH SMILES
    KEEP FLOWIN' LOVIN YA SCRIBE
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You

    FLOWED THISSSS!!!!!!

    (I sit in awe of your skills !)

    THANK YOU!!!! :)

    A
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tight work poet!

    one love, blak
     
  5. 8th wonder

    8th wonder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    over here shaking my head sis!
    ((((((dizzy))))))

    8th!
     
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    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :jumping: Tight! :hot: OnPoint!!!

    excellence has arrived today...
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Pztvnrg...

    Diggin' ya flow along with the "positive energy" emanating!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
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