Black Poetry : I am FREE

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PoeticAlize, Nov 23, 2002.

  1. PoeticAlize

    PoeticAlize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm all smiles
    and laughs
    cuz i have a secret
    i'm gonna break away
    break free
    i'ma spread my wings
    and rise
    far above
    my cage
    my open cage
    it wont hold me
    enclose me
    keep me down
    i'll be gone
    on a warm breeze
    floating above
    the past
    of fake smiles
    a brokenheart
    a tattered soul
    gone
    i wont be touched
    death wont
    hurt me
    cuz i have an oppurtunity
    and i won't
    i can't
    let it past
    i'm gonna fly
    and rejoyce
    and sing
    and praise HIM
    for...
    I AM FREE
     
  2. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    :wave: Haaaaaaaaaaay PoeticAlize :wave:

    ~ Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome ~

    Yes Yes Yes !!! We do alla that stuff here !!!

    Beautiful poetry, thank you for joining and sharing.
    Please make yourself at home.

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  3. Legendof_1_Spirit

    Legendof_1_Spirit Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    <materializes from nothingness>

    Hand claps and a whole lotta snaps for this piece!
    Really enjoyed the flow and rhythm of your expression here.
    Freeing oneself from our own self-made prisons is often harder than freeing oneself from the bounds that society often places on us. One of the most important aspects of life is being able to look into ourselves and see our own unique greatness, while at the same time accepting our own flaws - which are not flaws when viewed from the perspective of- no one is perfect and everyone is perfectly flawed, thus we are individually unique.

    Keep rising.

    <flickers and fades away>
     
  4. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "it's freedom...said it's freedom time now..."

    so good to see your :spinstar: beautiful light :spinstar: has blessed us in our poetic home...please find a seat and take off your shoes...seems you should be staying quite a while cuz you fit right in :)

    Great Flow!
    2fish
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    free at last
    free at last
    thank GOD almighty
    da mind free at last.....sing da song sistah
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    let your SECRET be known...coz this flight is about to get full.:)

    loving the flow of you.
     
  7. PoeticAlize

    PoeticAlize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you all. i appreciate the love, and i will be returnin it, because it feels good to be loved. thank you.
     
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    NittyGrit Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    free at last...
    free at last....
    thank God Almighty
    I'm free at last...

    enjoy your emancipation!

    NittyGritt ReddClay
     
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