Quiet Poetry Lounge : I aint playin' - dont come in here readin this if U aint Lola!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by oldsoul, Nov 10, 2011.

  1. OldSoul

    OldSoul Permanent Black Man PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Swept

    What its like to have my heart be captured
    What its like to have my mind enraptured
    What its like to have my soul enthralled
    What its like to have my love be called
    What its like to have my lips invited
    What its like to have my nature excited
    What its like to have my fears expire
    What its like to feel my body on fire
    What its like to have my orgasms come
    From the sound of your voice which is sweeter than rum.
    What its like to hear everything rhyme
    What its like to be thinking of you all the time
    What its like to see your face in my mind night and day
    What its like to want to taste you in every way
    What its like to want to hold you and never let go
    What its like to be your daddy and know
    What its like to feel my Baby's love grow
    Right next to mine in our garden all aglow.
    That's what its like to be
    Swept.

    For LFTW

    --[hlr]12/06/04--

     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whewwww!!! nothing but love for u baby ! sound like what cha sayin......Oooops !

    well u left it written on my wall ....i'm outta here ...lol
     
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    ****, my name ain't LOLA....but, I'll take the punishment for the violation I just committed. If thats what its like to be swept....please sweep me now:p:lol:....makes you giddy, I know!
     
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    Oh My....Somebody is sangin' "Touch Me in The Morning" or "Somewhere in My Lifetime" I am just sayin'..well
     
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    Additionally to Bro. Soul...whatchutalkinboutWillis... if you don't post here we can't read it here!!
    Enuff said!! lol
     
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