Black Poetry : I Ain No Ways Tired!!!

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  1. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A hectic schedule,
    But I'm finally home.
    The kids are yellin',
    But I want time alone.

    Kids are in the tub,
    Then quickly in bed.
    But one look at you...
    I know what's ahead.

    I swerve to avoid
    Your advancing embrace.
    I'm just too tired
    To visit that place.

    You're tenderly kissing me,
    Saying "I understand."
    But if you do,
    Then why are your hands...umph!

    My grip grows strong
    Upon your flesh.
    As you prowl upon me,
    I can't confine this.

    You've flipped my switches,
    I'm totally wired.
    Take me to that place,
    Cuz I ain' no ways tired.

     
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    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes! Yes! and Yes! again

    I feel ya all the way poet on dis!
    Tyte scribe!:toast:
     
  3. Danilyn

    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whew!

    I thought it was just me!!
    Speak da truth sista :) !
     
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    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HEL-LOOOO!!!!

    TIGHT...TIGHT...TIGHT...

    much respect.

    one.
     
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    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you just...

    ...go 'head girlie,
    'cause I tell ya what,
    I wouldn't be tired
    either :lol:!
    *feelin this poetry*
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wooo indeed sis indeed

    i feel ya here .....i feel noway tired
    come to far from where i started
    say it wit a smile ya sho nuff on hit!:)
     
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    i've visited that place...

    ...have tasted the smell of a gentle touch
    that led to much sweetness.

    ride the waves, my sistah.
    ...feel the release.:)
     
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    -Joyce-

    -poem- just woke me up... early morning here... nice flow sweetie...

    :x:
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Joyce,

    I heard that! Diggin this piece. :)


    Poetically Turn'd Out!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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    Joyce I'm loving this piece........funny how the right touch in the right place gives us a burst of energy.......hmmmm
     
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