Black Poetry : I Actually Feel That...

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  1. mzpoetic8705

    mzpoetic8705 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It is very seldom when I moan to the sounds of poetry
    But your words have got a sista screaming
    “***** F**!< me! Please, pretty please?”
    Yeah, kind of out of my normal way of saying things like,
    “There’s something that attracts me to you
    And if you don’t mind, I’d like to further explore these
    Cravings in a quiet and discreet place…preferably your HOUSE!!”
    But I thought that you would respect me more if I gave you my HONESTY
    Rather than letting you rush right in the pu$$y…oops!
    Here I go again, using language that I know I have no business using
    BUT, it’s hard to express how I feel about the situation
    Without saying how I ACTUALLY feel about the situation
    Hmm…I know what you’re thinking,
    “Another confused chick who doesn’t know WHO or WHAT she wants…she’s probably a virgin…yeah she is”
    Truth is, I AM…but so what!
    I still know plenty of ways to please you
    And it doesn't even involve me touching you
    Now, how do you like that?

    See, one never fully comprehends the power of a poets’ pen
    I am able to inscribe my love songs on your mind
    While using my time to create fantasies of your mind undressing me
    Your body reading to me
    Your fingers caressing me
    Your lips talking to me
    And did I say, "YOUR BODY reading TO ME!!!!"
    Oh yes, I did
    But these are things you refuse to see
    For your mind is incapable of understanding that
    All that you see isn’t what you get
    But BABY you can have me!!!
    Anytime, any place….****
    Just throw me on a plate and eat me, no literally
    EAT ME
    I know some women out there may hate me for these breath taking words
    But this is how I truly feel about the situation
    And, it’s hard to express how I feel about the situation
    Without saying how I ACTUALLY feel about the situation

    And some may ask, “What is the point behind this poem?”
    Answer, I HAVE NO IDEA…but someone will like it
    Someone will find this poem to be meaningful
    Full of truth and reality
    One with identity of individuality, against conformity, maintaining its goal of longevity
    This poem will be a light out of the tunnel for few
    But a pat on the back for many
    This poem will be one of TRUTH
    Maybe not for ME
    But definitely one for you

    So the point I GUESS I was trying to make is …
    There is truth behind every lie
    And the lie is …
    “it’s hard to express how I feel about the situation
    Without saying how I ACTUALLY feel about the situation”
    WHY? You ask...because
    There is always a better way of saying things
    Always a better way of doing things
    Always a place for change

    So let’s try this again,
    “Hello. Nice to meet you, maybe (if it is possible) we can go out for dinner sometime
    Get to know one another on a mutual level”
    He looks me in the eyes and says, “Sure, it would be my pleasure.”
    And I look him right in the eyes, as I grasp his mind
    It is then when I realize that
    My mind is far more powerful than my thighs!
    And that is definitely how I actually feel about the situation:)

    ---MzPoetic
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    say it again louder so all can hear ...word up the power of the mind !
    tyte drop
     
  3. mzpoetic8705

    mzpoetic8705 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANKS RICH!!!! YES, i can never stress the point 2 much...LADIES, your MIND is all YOU NEED to get a GOOD man....unless you're lookin for someone to bone for the night...lol...but yes rich, glad u liked it :)
     
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