Black Poetry : I’m the Punch Line King #5

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  1. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I’m the Punch Line King #5

    Got a lazy crew even with crazy glue// your rhymes
    Couldn’t adhere to wall it appear all// your stuff is asinine
    And proved wrong, groove long and don’t soothe a dome
    Stuff don’t smooth on like lotion that I use at home//
    Beautifully cast my powers like a mass of flowers bloom
    Fast for hours but your flow trash and cowers// as a task doomed
    Write hot rhymes that pop minds but your slop not divine//
    Call the preacher you may rap wise after baptized// in wines
    Don’t wash behind ears your line appears// wounded sometimes
    Like war casualties with bazaar tragedies// bullets sever spines
    Raise dues and blaze fools// like fire my type desire is vicious
    Inspired and suspicious// of being the greatest empire feels delicious
    Like cornflakes but you born among scorn fakes// and deals fictitious
    Too many rain summer seasons is garbage cruise in my hummer
    With reason and knowledge// but you just seem to get dumber
    Should inform yourself my storm soars deft// like thunder
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word up punch line King u are !
    tyte drop brutha
    don't forget to become a premium member to support what u love best and
    love to do get all the full features & benefits bruh !
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Madd creation once more
    tight drop!!!

    Peace
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    well alright then...
    this was tyte :jumping:
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you all for the props for real doe
     
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    I got you
    X and O's like tic tac toe
    Monopoly money Tantrum says Go
    Get the hell out of Jail go directly to Go
    I got the means to connect four
    Red or Black chips I collect the doe
    Chris aint rockin harder than my HBO
    Im a real american hero GI Joe
    More liono than cheetar im thunder cat you know
    More confessions than usher fa sho
    Get disrespectful i'll usher that a-- to the door
    Got the flashlight for cops you know
    The roaches scatter when I Raid the door
    Xlarge Magnums Trojan man you know
    Punchlines its crunch time when I hit the floor
    Proac your teenage pimples-erase the blimish
    Cry me a river justin remember-show me some flesh-
    Janet remember-Im the Brother that make haters give up
    I got Punchlines yall better pick up

    Much Love Brother Madd Hear Ya Soon
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love the flow, flow on poet.
     
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