Black Poetry : I’M NOT TRYING TO TAKE YOU FROM YOUR MAN …

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  1. garlicsalt99

    garlicsalt99 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I’M NOT TRYING TO TAKE YOU FROM YOUR MAN …

    Listen to what I’m saying, hear me if you can
    I’m trying to be with you right now, but I’m not trying to take you from your man
    The love that you have for him, I’m not trying to take away
    I just want your body … your mind and soul, with him, they can stay
    I want to be all over that *** like pebbles on a beach
    I want to nut on your navel and make love to your peach
    I want you to distend and stretch yourself, for the bed sheets I want you to reach
    I want to make your body the pulpit from which I choose to preach
    I want you to be as free as a mother eagle that spreads her wings
    I want to do the kind of stuff to you that they can’t even put [or print] in magazines
    I want to kiss the nook and cranny that lies in between your thighs
    Making you scrunch your eyebrows, tightly closing your eyes
    The scope of what I want to do to you is broader than anything I could ever say
    But I want to make you buck and bounce … soon and without delay
    I want to suck you and **** you – insert myself inside your center crease
    I want you to give me the coveted liquid silk that is your orgasmic release


    GO TO http://www.theblackpoetrycafeonline.com/i-m-not-trying-to-take-you-from-your-man-t2200.html TO READ THE FULL VERSION OF HIS POEM
     
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    LovesDestiny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    How in the world did I miss this yesterday? I was really tripping...be right back...
     
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    LovesDestiny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey, I'M JUST SAYIN...LOL

    I said the last time I wasnt gonna read your masterpieces in the work place! Its an occupational hazzard! But there I went and done did it again! I think I'm starting to see why your name is garlicsalt...but I won't go into that right now.

    Can I put a shout out? Can I make a request to the request line?

    If you combined the sweetness of "If Only You Would Have Me" with the inhibitions of "I'm Not Trying to Take You From Your Man" and "Sugar Along the Rim"....

    What would that look like? Basically, I wanna go back to the days of Weird Science and build myself a man...in the form of poetic flow of course! LOL

    As always GS99, it's been a pleasure! And thank you for starting off my week RIGHT!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So this is why the poetry forum is as steamy as a sauna... Sizzling write.
     
  5. garlicsalt99

    garlicsalt99 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :sand: I've learned the way of the forum. Respect the forum, and the forum will respect you :sand:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whewwwwww ya fire blaze is high and burning mad heat on this sizzling zip
     
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    garlicsalt99 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rich ... everytime I see a reply from you, I feel like I'm at a party, and you're the DJ that hypes up the crowd :smokin: Thanx for the read bro.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Man garlicsalt you know how we do it , time we hook up on another escort series
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    um

    you're asking for an awful lot here man

    i don't think her man would like that

    lol
     
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