Black Poetry : I’m Americanized and lame rhyme characterized by pain

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  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I’m Americanized and lame rhyme characterized by pain
    Best recognize my name I’m about to rise to fame
    Sympathized with dames wanting a kiss for bed fame
    Seen bent romances lead to events and circumstances and things
    My lyrical are hood love material goods such as bling
    A fat dude with attitude has afflicted his behavior and
    Restricted his major goals, his pager holds messages and plans
    That won’t ever be used, never refuse a chance to advance and stand
    On top with an abundant supply of thoughts every guy fought
    For this dream need a brisk spleen to be slick and not get caught
    Up on phonics, alert as a devastated fan ready to convert
    Cultivated land into real estate and deal great with the dirt
    Of gas prices which has become a fast crisis sweeping the US
    Must replace disgrace and flaw with law in order to be true and bless
    In rap today you may able to flow bold but your style will grow old
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As with anything, fads will come and go, but the truth has staying power, no matter how it's flowed. Speak on it.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    telling it like it is
     
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