Black Poetry : I’m Addicted To You...Part II: The Confession...

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  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    pitch black...
    i’m involuntarily shakin’
    I need you...
    the space you used to fill is vacant
    uncontrollably...
    i’m tossin’
    my mind...
    is in the loss and
    i’m in...
    denial of you love that was once so full

    i try and try...
    to say its not true
    but the truth is...
    i’m only relieved by you
    all the joy I had...
    was from the things you’d do
    and everyday...
    your soul lingers and continues

    each day...
    I fall further into the dark
    with emptiness and withdrawal...
    since the day of you depart
    i’m falterin’...
    and fallin’...
    and shakin’ ...
    from our painful distance
    I need you...
    and all of your persistence

    I can’t...
    EVER survive alone
    although...
    i’m still denyin’ that you’re gone
    your what I need...
    to continue each new day
    but I realize...
    somethin’ and I don’t even want to say

    but baby...
    your my drug
    the sole...
    relievance of my pain
    might as well...
    stop denyin’
    that i’m addicted to you...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    love's addiction can be blind yet an eye opener
    flow on pt. #3
    i'm awaiting thee
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks rich

    well bard maximus...u can flatter me and make me smile, but at the same time i seek critique if it is to help me and not to hurt me....so respond with ur speed.....
     
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    beautiful lovely anticipating part 3 or at least I hope for one :) peace and blessins keep flowin
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks serenti...part 3 will be up soon.....
     
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    tight poem........... i like i like.........much love :)
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks alot sarcasm... :)
     
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    painfully scarry that this could be my fate...better get my act together before its too late....thank you for sharing your pain, it runs deep....Love strong
     
  9. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for ur thoughts cypher...:)
     
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    ooooh! addictions Huh! tell it. I got me one two. lol like your scribe
     
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