Black Poetry : hypocrite

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  1. Unforgettable

    Unforgettable Member MEMBER

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    You talk the good talk
    You tell what you know,
    You think that you have all of the answers
    You put on a real good show.
    You say not to do something
    But you do it the same,
    When somebody else does it
    You call them out of their name.
    You are lacking in areas but yet
    You put down someone else,
    You need to stop focusing on what I'm doing
    Pay attention to yourself.
    You need to realize who you are
    You will find out sooner than later,
    You criticize and you judge
    You are a hypocrite and a hater.
    Why? Who are you?
    Don't walk around like your **** don't stink,
    Before you open your mouth
    You need to stop and think.
    Don't hate me because I'm beautiful
    Don't hate me because I'm smart,
    Don't hate me because I'm always smiling
    Don't hate me because of the kindness of my heart.
    Don't be mad at me because you are mean and
    People don't respond well to you,
    Think about some of the things that you say and
    Some of the things that you do.
    There are too many things going on
    To be focusing on what I'm doing,
    A personality or sense of humor
    Should be what you are pursuing.
     
  2. IfUComeSoftly

    IfUComeSoftly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    one word..... PREACH!!!!!


    sis... you are more than a novice.. i loved reading it... flow on and i hope to see more from you...
     
  3. abstract219

    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    whew weee!

    words so true, so real.....wish I could deliver this one to my neighbor, my cousin, that lady in church....Elder Wiggins....my friend girl Tanya....another neighbor....ahhh....Mrs. Clemson cross the street....

    a great drop, a true lesson to be learned......i'll bee reading you....
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I think we should replace Webster's definition of hypocrite, and replace it with some of this truth, okay? Bullseye poet!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Hit home and strong speaketh , tell it all
    let'em know by this poetic call......Tyte unforgettable
     
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    Intrepid Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    [email protected]! is all I have to say
     
  7. cursed heart

    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Speak baby baby speak!
    Hypocrites are everywhere!
    Great write!:terrific:
     
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