Black Haiku : Hypocrite

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hypocrite smiling
    Conscience asleep at the wheel
    On the road to hell

    Claiming sisterhood
    In one breath, and calling her
    A "B" in the next

    What do we call this
    Menace to society
    Judas is too kind
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    da destructional
    mask of flase tales within
    da smiling of face
     
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    She can only smile
    When there is chaos about
    Caused by hers truly

    Otherwise, stone face
    Looks in a mirrored vision
    Reflection missing

    What kind of creature
    Roams free casting no shadow?
    Spawned Deep from evil
     
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    criticizing all
    for same things she does herself
    can't even see that
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She knows what she does
    Is wrong, just believes that she's
    Got a divine right
     
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    :bowdown: YOU Dropped A Bomb Chile :bomb: ...What A Divine Revelation Within These 3 Lines Gurl!

     
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    Smirking in my face,
    Salt sprinkled on my stab wounds
    Murder starts in heart
     
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    Her hands are bloody
    She hides them in shame and fear
    Covered with white gloves

    Her Evil bleeds through
    Her presence is an ill wind
    She thinks we don’t see

    Darkness falls quickly
    With each wicked step she takes
    Surely, she shall fall
     
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    Fear and shame don't last
    Long enough to stop evil
    She's got to have it

    Like moth to flame, she's
    Driven to insanity
    And back in a flash

    "Pimptress" slap master
    She'll try to take a man down
    To her own evil



    Thank you Joyce, oh queen of haiku.
     
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    Evil shall not reign
    I serve a higher power
    Judgment shall be swift

    Greater is the lord
    It shall not go unpunished
    To him all shall bow
     
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