Black Poetry : Hypnotized

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  1. Manchid

    Manchid Member MEMBER

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    As I look in her eyes I see darkness
    from which a rose blooms. I see lifes
    harsh reality as I dig deeper into
    her mentality. I remind myself dont
    become hypnotized, for her eyes
    can pierce through your soul
    shedding light to your demise. But I
    fall deeper into her soul tangled
    and twisted in surpressed emotions,
    hopelessly I fall and fall through
    lost devotions and her hearts
    coldness.I became lost like a puppy
    in downtown Manhattan. So I plead with
    myself dont become hypnotized but it`s
    too late for her eyes have control over
    mine creating ths line. Unsevered by
    outside occurences trying hard not
    to give into this nervousness. I
    realize that there is no you or me
    only we for our souls have combined
    and our paths have aligned creating
    one destiny making my thoughts yours
    and yours mine. We fall deeper into
    the darkness of our soul lost in our
    past fearing our future as it goes
    on we wonder how long it`s going to
    last. See becoming hypnotized
    is giving up the earths rotation
    giving up all relations to become we
    not you or me but a entity far
    seperated from reality. So the next
    time you stare into someones eyes
    remember these fatal lines dont
    become hypnotized.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the new family u found
    welcome from above as i bless u this love
    welcome this sweet piece u pose like a red rose
    da heart of her beauty hypnotize ya soul
    tyteeeeeeeeeeee!!!! welcome :thanks: :toast:
    :luv: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice very nice
    welcome to the family
    enjoy
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    This was a beautiful piece, the words posed just draw you in, hypnotized. Welcome to destee!
     
  5. Obscure

    Obscure Active Member MEMBER

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    nice drop again man.
    you have some nice talent.
    i enjoy your work.
    you add some nice flava to the board.
    i feel like you used the word "soul" at too many parts
    it all good.
    nevertheless this is a great drop.
    WuN...
     
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