Black Poetry : hypnotic

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by eternalprince, Oct 21, 2003.

  1. eternalprince

    eternalprince Active Member MEMBER

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    I wish I could be you
    Wish I could stand on pedistals
    And wontonly abuse
    All those who look up to you.
    I love how easy it is for you to accuse
    All the plebians of crimes against the empire
    Ignoring the fact that your transgressions
    Stink higher than the pedistal I admire
    I want to point fingers too
    I want to take time from my love life
    To tell people how ******* wrong they are
    For following thier hearts
    I want to be so hypnotized by my own righteousness
    That I have nothing better to do than
    Run my mouth about things that don't concern me.
    I want to complain that the woman I love
    Took my advice and got over me
    Then tell people that she slept with someone I barely knew
    And swear he was my best friend.
    I want to act like a *****
    And expect reality to warp into my perception.
    I want to have the audacity to believe
    That I could really be the moral majority
    While continually spreading lies like petulant 4th grader
    I want to be just like you....
    On second thought.... **** YOU
    You fear the knives in your back
    Well eyes wide son cause when I attack
    It'll be to your face
    I will not be fake
    i am not hypnotized
     
  2. eternal

    eternal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dayum you are tight!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well done and said ........nice scribe
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice very nice
     
  5. eternalprince

    eternalprince Active Member MEMBER

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    thank you for your support
     
  6. Da1whoownslife

    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh yes.... this was it...... Very tyte scribe......
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow.....nice scribe:)
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this raged with emotion...
    I often wonder how some poeple
    are like this...
    this piece was very thought provoking...
    very real flow
     
  9. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    furious flow
    sickenening (the east coast way
     
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