Black Poetry : Hypnotic Suggestion

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  1. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When I look into your eyes, I'm spellbound by your gaze,
    My dear Qween I can't get you out of my mind, I'm lost in a daze.
    What are you doing to me and why can't I resist?
    Why am I so compelled to give you a passionate kiss.
    Your every wish shall be my every command,
    tell me what you desire, tell me your demands.
    I can't break free, & I’m not sure if I want to,
    for my purpose & desire is to please you.
    Come to your room you tell me, & lay you down,
    make love passionately to you Yes I bow to the crown,
    that you wear on your head, the Qween that you are
    a well of undefined passion & beauty that outshines the stars.
    Your orders are clear to me, supply you with love and affection,
    as I humbly submit to you my Qween & your Hypnotic Suggestion.
     
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    Hi Brother Bishop
    It is just something about your poetry
    That's hard to resists. Once again
    I am a captive of your Hypnotic Suggestion!
    Wonderful
    Peace~N~Love
     
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    Beautiful poem. It is amazing what people would do when they are in love with someone. That women is lucky to have you. Wonderful write.
     
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    She has definitely taken you under her spell, and what a sensational way to be taken. As usual, a hypnotizing write.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man this was fire hypnotical blazzin
     
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    My Hypnotic Suggestion is for us to lay
    upon the many stars and the moon that is laughing at our
    sensual behavior
    like two ravished beast tearing at each other flesh
    as the flames of passions rise beneath your loins
    the hunger pain that runs runs thru our veins
    as we both like fiends satisfy our cravings
    our lust
    consume like no other
    as we both caress the night away
    with our bodies making sounds that the night seem to want to hear
    as we hear the crickets play a melodious sounds as we are making love
    Lay with me, play with me
    as i continue to send you
    Hypnotic Suggestions...........:lipss:
    love the write Bishop take care love..........
     
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    Whew! There's nothing like finding a man that DESIRES to treat you like a Queen!!! That's all we really want anyway!!! You killed it!!!!
     
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