Quiet Poetry Lounge : hush....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Auroraflower, Apr 28, 2004.

  1. Auroraflower

    Auroraflower Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In the dream..

    Youre hands touched..
    my irrelevent scars..
    and let my thigh,s blush...
    My painmoans mum..

    Irradiate eyes ..
    they take my..
    whats youre ism?

    Murals of youre lips hunting on my back..
    Youre love colours are appearing as rainbows in youre eyes..

    mustee..

    I lay still..
    fingertip stroke..
    nerves negotiations..
    onset us openly...
    as we Love...
    in need of eachother..
    Oh love..
    as we love in need of ..
    ache..
    Love...
    o ..
    love..
    hold me...
    bodily bind me..
    i acquiece in youre essence..
    you achieved my soul..
    touch ..
    kiss ..
    breath loose..
    nudity of fear emotions..
    are nowhere..
    The beauty of free love is...
    we nearby natal...

    We look ....
    irisses eclips..
    we across ..
    the acme...

    love...

    hold me ...
    i drown and refresh..
    we mmm..
    we aww..
    we ohh..

    we Oase..

    we oase ..
    in obesty...

    Youre paraph kiss in my neck...

    I,m out on parole

    I,m laying there silent..
    youre hands stroking my face..
    youre eyes sending me a soft embrasse..

    i stare at you..

    shaking..



    i did not knew this...


    heaven showed me....








    lovemaking...
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    again welcome very lovely sigh
    as the opening doors give light
    dis was tyte
     
  3. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW...

    this was so AWESOME...

    I had soooo many favorite parts...I don't know where to begin...

    Incredible piece!
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm with sage, here. This one was beyond words, because you didn't need to use a plethora of them to express these intense feelings...wow.
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

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    this was tight
    welcome within again
    flow on....
     
  6. Auroraflower

    Auroraflower Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks all:heart:

    i made a change cause in stead of..

    the beauty of free love it...

    it suppose to be

    the beauty of free love is.....



    hi all :wave: you know me ...


    just changed the name...


    and go back to poetry..





    Auroraflower:heart:
     
  7. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sorry I'm late.....:lol:Lovin this piece had me tuned in foreal:wink:
     
  8. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    May I have the pleasure of saying...Welcome to a family of open arms. I see you're comming in with a bang...keep up the good work.
     
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