Khasm13 : hush...just between you and me

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  1. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    enter the depths of the human mind
    where the real appears sublime
    and the sublime looks like a vine hanging
    your soul’s fate is sealed
    with all the talk of gun banging dope slanging
    pockets dangling with all that loot
    these topics that derive therein
    do diddly but dilute and pollute
    the raging rhyme river
    my humble task is as the map giver
    as i deliver phat phrases
    like arrows from a quiver
    cause in just a sliver of space
    i reveal the real waste….

    as mentals coagulate like paste
    i wage war with the forces
    that try to encase and mace my
    3rd’s mind eye
    instead of waging war in holy lands
    from the sky
    medusa’s glare petrifies
    the will to survive
    and sometimes life lessons learned
    cost lives….

    like hives of bees with no queen
    no direction
    only self-inflection….


    my peoples section is congested
    so should i look at other peoples section
    as less than???
     
  2. ASHANTA

    ASHANTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Keep it coming words of a prophet say it loud the legends of the last poets is this house.
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautiful like dis here and how it was written
    keep it coming
     
  4. poeticwords

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    i love it....im a big fan of yours...u inspire me...keep writing i will
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wonderful as always Khasm you please me with your work always peace unto you and keep flowin
     
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    you be hittin hard scribe from urban point of view. keepin it real as you flow. love your style.
     
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    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MAN I LOVES YOU!!! THIS WAS DEEP! DEEP BUT SO PLAIN TO MY THIRD EYE!!!! KEEP FLOWING!
     
  8. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Once again, once again, KHASM!!!

    BOY you have freaked my mind and left me there to concieve you.

    Totally feeling you babe.
    My mind will never have enough of that good lovin.
    Keep on Keepin On.

    Holla Back!!
     
  9. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you took me there....Bishop digs this piece right here!!!
     
  10. Dream Weaver

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    KHASM KHASM KHASM, I seriously ADORE you, well your work. I don't have as much time as I used to so I stop by now and then to read a few, and I must say you have constantly been one of the best. I just wonder what inspires you, you seem to have so much insight into EVERYTHING, may I be so curious as to inquire???
     
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