Quiet Poetry Lounge : Hush babe hush

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    My dear hush
    u don't have to fuss
    please don't cuss
    my love is here

    i know what he did
    playin like a kid
    hush put a lid on it
    my love is here

    it will embrace the
    tears on ya face
    it will caress the pain
    as it heal in my arm
    u may lay
    just hush now !

    my love is here
    it was pay the cost
    it will toss any lost
    to myth
    share a moment of
    comfort as i kiss
    the memories away
    hush now !
    true love is here to saty.
     
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    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Rich,

    I love this!! It is warm and heartfelt. It is wonderful to read such a beautifully written piece. This one touched me.

    ~Sierra~ :)
     
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    hush baby hush! just come over here! nice piece!
     
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    sierra...............thank u happy u felt it within

    purplemoons .........yes hush now and come here
    take hold of a love so dear ......Thankz sis.
     
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    in the quiet tyme of hush
    forth come peace in mind
    as to love that covers the
    pain of thoughts
    inside the loveth of arms
    forth be inner strenght
    it comfort thee
    the song is caressing
    where as the soul rest
    thankz cindy
     
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    yes very close inside
    every kiss a peace
    born on thoughts
    to be shared.............
     
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    most welcome dear one !
     
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    beautiful and heartfelt piece...
     
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    yes it's the warmth that covers one's soul in comfort
    Thankz my sis
     
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    OOPS! You did it again!

    You have a wonderful grasp of the female spirit, how to nurture it and how to comfort it , surely when touched by a sincere love, any pain becomes neutralized....consider yourself the "Love Doctor"! Making any housecalls! LOL:D
    Loved this piece as much as I love you!
    Smooches!:kiss:

    Blessings On Ya House!
     
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