Black Poetry : Hurts So Good

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by spicybrown, Dec 20, 2005.

  1. spicybrown

    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My dearest love, Ultrasweet Butter Pecan dreamboat,

    What extinguished the flame that kept this Love Boat afloat?,

    Could it be the extra 10 pounds that happened upon my body?,

    Or was it the last time we were biquering I was in yo' face all snotty,

    I'll have you know at times, I'm a Drama Queen of sorts,

    Excuse my maladjustments, got a big lump in my throat,

    Your loving HURTS SO GOOD, that in your presence I submit,

    My heart on meltdown, attention undivided, cmon you know you $h*t,

    Each time our bodies merge, and we exchange emotions sexually,

    Pain before pleasure, 10' to measure:uhoh:, feeding you tid-bits of just how SPICY,

    You make it HURT SO GOOD,

    For all the ups&downs and nights spent crying into my pillow,

    Like a junkie withdrawn too long, can't seem to get enough of you,

    We can go on&on debating who's right or wrong,

    Don't matter cuz at the end of the day You&I are singing the same ol' song,

    (((((Ms.Spicy & Ol' Spice)))))

    That hug HURT SO GOOD.....


    :love: :spinstar: :spinstar:
     
  2. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you know it hurts so good go spicy, go spicy, go spicy. you know i'll still laughing at your comment about the pillow. that was hilarious you got me on that. this flo was sick meaning tyte. flow on gurllllllllllllllllll!:ilu: :spinstar:
     
  3. spicybrown

    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nevar

    Thanx for the love shown:) Flowin like a weave in the windy city:spinstar:
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nuttin' wrong with a little spice in ya life :D

    tyte,
    jh.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i see all the spicy juices flowing in a mixture love this drop
     
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    Sister Spicy
    Making love in a spicy
    Sensual way it must
    Hurt So Good
     
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    ASHANTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is beautiful poet , you are a true romantic.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Still has flavor in it, despite the millions of miles down the road. That's called staying power. Enjoyed the way you posed this scribe.
     
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    yo, this was serious, i love it..........
     
  10. Passionfruit005

    Passionfruit005 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like this one, has a lotta passion in it. keep puttin it down
    holla back.........................^
     
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