Black Poetry : hurtin me

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  1. Unforgettable

    Unforgettable Member MEMBER

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    I don't know why
    you do the things that you do
    You said you would change
    that things would get better between me and you
    But I have yet to see you put forth an effort
    To change the things that is pulling me away from you
    You say im trippin when I tell you how Im starting to feel
    like you are ashamed I am not a size 5 like them girls on tv
    I need some of your time not just physically but emotionally
    but i dont think I can go on with how you are treating me
    Or do you even care of what I am making aware to you
    if not let me say it bluntly
    U ARE STILL HURTING ME
     
  2. IfUComeSoftly

    IfUComeSoftly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sista I'm here to tell you
    you're beautiful in the
    skin your'e in
    your mindset--above reproach
    consistantcy breeds reoccurance
    Sista I'm here to tell you
    you can't change the
    skin he's in
    you can only change you
    don't continue to hurt yourself
    by allowing him to hurt you
    Sista I'm here to tell you
    if there is any confusion
    read brother Sefirot's
    thoughts on emotion
    better known as my tagline
    Sista I'm here to tell you
    Look down


    i felt every word of this... i've been there before.. hope to never be there again... flow on poet...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    For thee whom lay pain
    ya heart should not claim
    yet aim high wit ya head to the sky
    ya worth is much more then one may know
    from da feelin to emotions and more

    stop the pain walk away unclaim
    for true love awaits just the same
    ya beautiful if u size 1 or 15
    he's not ya hearts true king
    yet ur such a worthy queen

    move forward and be loved
    as u love and rise beyond
    his misty twist ......i feel ya .
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow been down that road before. your beautiful no matter what shape and size you are. i suggest dumping him and moving on to a brotha who appreciate the true meaning of treating you like a queen. flo on poet.
     
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    When you learn how to love yourself you can control your pain.
    Sistah the only thing you can change is allowing him to diminish your self worth.
    Crying over someone who is not crying with you will ruin you if you let it.
    If he's running dont chase him because when you've ran for so long without rest,without oxygen and noone to quinch your thirst,in the end all you'll be is lost in him,last in place,exhausted and without!
    Much love baby and everything will fine trust me!
     
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    Re: Your hurting me

    I can't fathom why do what you do
    You said you would change you melody
    But your tune is still sounding off key to my ear
    And it don't seem like you trying to change your key
    Your sour notes have me turning away from you
    And when I tell your music is not soothing to me
    You say that I'm just don't have your same rhytmn
    And catch you admiring the others ladies beat
    While I'm waiting on you to feel my heartbeat
    I don't think i can take stay for another refrain
    Because I just can't stand your melody anymore
    And just in cause you don't understand my jargon
    Let me make it crystal clear you are still hurting me


    :getout:

    I can relate I've walk a mile in your shoes. But just know because your king has is not ready for you it does not make you less of a Queen.
     
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    thanx everyone i feel so loved :) yall 2 sweet
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes you are. And you should surround yourself with people that make you feel that way.
     
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    Don't let him hurt you
    Let him go
     
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