Black Poetry : HURTFUL

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  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HURTFUL
    !!!!!!!!!!!!!!


    Speaking through a veil of shame

    Everything weren't in my game

    Anyone can hurt

    Too many,

    Have been wronged

    Sorry, ma :10500:

    You thought of me

    As deepest

    Rolling sea

    Rolling for

    The life of me

    Oblivious to we

    Never One to despair

    Always happy to share



    Kept by my brother

    Intolerant of sum others

    Forgive me ~



    Darryl Abdu Omari :ghost:
    a.k.a. 1poetsought ~ copyright 2010
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well felt brother
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    “Hurtful"

    to some degree in my lifetime, I’m sure, I’ve been it and to a major degree in my lifetime I’ve definitely felt it.

    IME “I’m sorry”, “forgive me” and “I forgive you” are powerful words. When spoken they can stimulate a healing process and when unspoken they can hinder it.

    This piece touched soul deep, because there was an “I’m sorry” withheld that hindered the healing process in my life for a pretty-bit-of-time, until I discovered that forgiving someone, even if they failed to say, “I’m sorry” could bring healing as well.

    Sometimes a message written penetrates better than one heard.

    Thanks for sharing this!:)


    feelin'itsouldeep!
    Coco:dance:
     
  4. graphik

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    last line- liked it...
    "intolerant of sum others"..

    nice style.