Black Poetry : HURT...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by queentswana, Apr 30, 2004.

  1. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I need so much... for someone to love me,
    a love I can dwell in...the kind I can see.
    My heart is so heavy...and hurting real bad,
    I'm reaching for something...that I never had.


    I read all the love poems... that come on the threads
    I shed a few tears...and here's what I said:


    Will it hurt you to love me, the way that I need?
    can you stop all the things...that make my heart bleed?
    I'm dying inside...I die a little each day,
    from this emptiness I feel...and the games that you play.


    I begged for your love...I screamed and I moaned,
    If I can't get love...please leave me alone.


    I've been through more pain...than you will ever know,
    I have scars to prove it...see my face...don't it show?
    I have not the strength... to continue this way,
    Please, bow out gracefully...and leave here today!
     
  2. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Deep flow feeling this kinda made me sad :(
    Love this piece very well put "Love rain down" :wave:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very heartfelt my sista
    feelin you on this one
    but dont forget
    you are strong...
    rise ya head
    within know
    that God loves you
    when all else seems to
    fail....
    Peace unto you
    Love
    Angel:grouphug:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling da need to be loved
    tyte write u said it here
    feeling it all sistah
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You gave a clear description of feelings here, keep the flow going.
     
  6. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Sensual...
    thanks for the love and support on this.
     
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    very tight piece!!

    I have felt these things before too, queen - I know where you're comin from. I finally came to peace with it by realizing that I am enough and complete on my own. Not that I wouldn't still like a love, but if it never happens, I'm cool. But that's just me.

    Peace to you.
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is very nice queen....
    :heart:
    -story
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I know there's a God...somewhere ....
    thanks for feeling me on this.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, there are times when love need to be refreshed ...
    thanks for the support...you're always there.
     
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