Black Poetry : hurt

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by the_story, Sep 27, 2003.

  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i was lying in bed
    my heart tied in the
    fetal position tring to regress
    to where it, nor i, even existed

    i collapsed under the tears
    that fell like raindrops that
    stung my soft soul...

    wishing i didn't live
    or that i was never born

    blu was the color of my soul

    i needed soul healing
    so my hands can stop gripping
    dark wishes of painless-soft-silent
    death after midnight.....

    so that your words won't hurt me
    anymore.....
     
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    SUNkissed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ooohhhhh...
    what a MOVING peace (snaps)
    great read!!
    wow
     
  3. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    glad u feelin me sun, much love to ya!
    -story
     
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    like this alot...
    movin
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    soulful emotions felt within this scribe
    very nice
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks yall....
    much love,
    -story
     
  7. Cindy

    Cindy Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh, I feel your pain. Degrees of seperation... one day, you will just get angry that he made you feel this... and you will stand up and see a sunrise... maybe sit quietly and just count stars, but you will see that this was his loss... and you will start to heal.
    :heart:
    You are a gift, you are here for a reason... search for it.
    :wave:
    hey... much love.
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks cindy, don't know how much ur words mean to me
    much love,
    -story
     
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    Cindy is right, story: there will be pain, anger and then release. You have to let your feelings bubble up and then subside, even though it's not easy. One thing that always helps me in times like those is to remember the old adage, "this too shall pass." It gives me hope to think of that. I hope it does that for you as well.

    :grouphug:
     
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    I absolutely love your style, If I could write like this
    I'd never stop, your definitely world class........

    I loved the imagery and the way you stretch the mind
    to see and feel from different angles....

    the emotion in this was definitely real...
     
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