Black Poetry : Hurt, Secrets, and Lies

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  1. FattnBeautiful

    FattnBeautiful Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I was born in this infested pool of Hurt, Secrets, and Lies.
    Anger is over flowing with the Pain
    that was in flicked on them.
    This house is full of Little Dirty Secrets
    that no one dares to share.
    The Lies upon Lies that everyone has told
    to keep the Truth of the Hurt they feel are catching up to them.
    The Hurt from so long ago is so deep
    And is still so real.
    I try to swim in this very deep pool
    with my eyes closed shut drowning with
    all the years of Unresolved Hurt, Pain and Hate.
    But no one seems to see that these feelings and ways of thinking are passing on to their children.
    We Do Not See.
    We are caught in the middle with no relief in sight.
    It’s just put away in a chest, chained and buried in the deepest part of their hearts
    Never to be opened for their Fear that everyone will Know their Hurts, Secrets, and Lies.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sad tales of truth and reality that lives between da soul & heart
    where pain of lies hurts deep and the secret remains in depth

    Great write poetess
     
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    FattnBeautiful Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you very much.
     
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    hate go way back to when able was slain
    a woman scorned represents all the pain in the game
    just lookin in the Good Book for where God said:
    "Let there be pain"... cause it was.. indeed all hell from the gate
    but burdens get put down from the choices we make

    born in it.. battle fitted
    wear the whole armor of God
    for no reason at all life sometimes is hard

    And never mind pot.. didn't even have piss
    no chance to come up.. just a prayer and a wish
    Trouble every where and I took it with bliss
    Lost all my friends from judas' kiss

    from the sun to the cold
    rather young intreverted to old
    if u know what i know
    there's still a along way to go
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What a cycle it is to be caught in, and what a challenge to break free of that cycle of negativity, yet it can be done. I felt the ache in your words.
     
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