Black Poetry : HURT n' PAIN

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    It's by my own hands

    as pain penetrates my heart
    my soul goes numb
    feet frozen in tyme
    I never knew it would return
    to torment me against loyality
    for i hurt as thee
    i'm locked in this solitary cell
    hidden as my heart cry da blood

    I couldn't suffer much more
    and be alive when security
    is a void stain
    what have i done
    I am nothing except that i was
    identified with some sweet & sad
    moments or the man who held
    time like some historic event
    for now as one hurt i also
    and when one is sadden so am i

    Inside my dictionary many
    words and book of chapters
    has been written
    believe me there is only one
    that substain my harvest
    unto thee i scream aloud
    in my deepest apology
    it made me think of u

    I do not ask forgiveness,
    a comfort I'll never deserve.
    i merely want to let you know,
    you are my world
    bring such upon thy heart
    i had no rights
    To snatch away such a precious gem
    and darken our blazzin light
    When I present these simple things
    I never thought to play
    didn't know da feeling or what they may say
    Would this confession torture you,
    Or have you longed to hear?
    to hear those two forbidden words
    as they vanquish all the pain
    and understand my dearest wish
    to know you once again.
    Though this has made me wise
    and left me in hurt n' pain
    now i lone to just whisper ya name
    somehow i will erase all that was done
    and for all upon you I apologize "
    My Nubian one .

    Deep in sorrow
    :crying::bye::crying:
     
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    Awwww....So sadly beautiful!

    Make it right Brother Rich!
    Make it right!

    Heartfelt scribe!

    :heart:
     
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    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    jus_dat_nice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is so touching $$RICH$$
    beautiful job
     
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    Wow Rich, This was beautiful, just beautiful ...No Wordz.....Thank you
     
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    Your $Richness$

    A bitter~sweet apology you have written here...
    and I am so feelin it.

    very nicely done.


    Epiphany:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thank you Purplemoons , sweet apple*pie , jus_dat_nice , LadyBelle and epiphany

    When one makes a mistake and can man up to his wrong or bring pain against
    his heart of love it makes the day end in peace.
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hello Sir. Richness...

    :wave:
    This is such a tender-hearted write

    I fell into your words and wanted to forgive you for her.

    An absolutely beautiful apology!


    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:hearts1:
     
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    Thankz coco ......they say it's good to confess it opens doors to better things !
     
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    It can be difficult to say you're sorry, but often we look back and rue those times when we should have apologized, but didn't. Well felt write.
     
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