Black Poetry : Hurry up this way Again

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  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Stay with me tonight​

    You are my sweet oasis

    Hurry up this way again

    I will let you
    Into the darkest places
    I’ll share
    My uncomfortable spaces

    A memory of you
    Came to me again tonight

    I was thinking about you and me

    Remembering late one night
    I leaned into your car window

    You stated you had to get home

    I longed to be in the passenger seat
    I asked you to kiss me but I was denied

    I left with feet

    That couldn’t find
    A straight path
    To take me home

    I wondered the streets all night
    Again I’m left all alone

    Since there have been others
    They don’t last or linger like you

    I know what we could build

    Would come to fruition and be real

    It’s been a while
    Since I saw your smile

    I often wonder
    Why you linger
    So heavily heavenly on my mind

    You said we had nothing
    You don’t act that way
    You play and lead me on

    Don’t play with my heart

    If we meet again
    I forgive you

    I hope you
    Forgive me too

    I accept what you desire
    Lover or friend
    I hope I say
    The right things to you

    That make you say
    You want me without delay
    So I can start
    My life with you
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    man

    this has to come from the heart
    i hope they could respect your feelings man

    and see your vision

    as one

    i definitely felt on this

    i like it when i read a piece and it has me sitting on the sideline cheering the writer on

    :great:
     
  3. watzinaname

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    True love is like that, it has staying power, even through trials and tribulations, because none of us are perfect. This read so warm and genuine Brother Hodee, I hope that love returns to you.
     
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    WOW Hodee :grouphug:
    Sister watz hit the nail on the head
    staying power is something else in and of itself
    such a rollercoaster of emotions in a quiet reflective piece/peace
    Good stuff brotha :)
    Props Poet
     
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    Sweet piece, delicate and lovely...

    I like when you said sweet oasis...


    yea, I know how it feels to be sent mixed signals...not cool...not cool at all.
     
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    speaking from da pit of the soul wit a warm sweet yet tender quest......awesome
     
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    Hodee - Love, either we're searching for it or running after it. Love the craft of your words in this one. Namyh
     
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