Black Poetry : Hurry Sundown

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  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HURRY SUNDOWN
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    Deathwatch beetles
    Are an open book
    Consuming words
    A life forsook

    Each passing day
    We're racked with pain
    As snugly worms
    Await the grave

    Hurry sundown
    Highest noon
    We live outside
    The coming boom

    Cancel Christmas
    Abolish spring ~
    Our nothings clipped
    I'll scribe to be

    Question not
    Such remedy
    Digestion...
    Scipts but quit in me

    Until I've wrote
    Mine history
    Immortals beg
    To differ me

    Hurry sundown
    Converge the clouds
    Almost famous
    Don't move the crowd

    Good as dead
    Will see me read
    We celebrate
    Immortal friends



    1poetsought ~ copyright 200
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    immortal friendship a celebrating feast

    very nice flow
     
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    Salute! I propose a toast to what friends come forth-

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    top honor's as POET of the Week
    congratulation !!!!!!
    keep flowin
     
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    this was nice. keep them comin 1poetsought. :toast:
     
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    Immortal friends forever! maybe will meet on the otherside as well
     
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    Beautiful flow 1poet I liked it
     
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