Black Poetry : Hurricane Dame

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Aug 16, 2004.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This seasoned Hurricane ~
    Hit smitten Joe-newlywed
    Lover man up and staked his claim
    She's the winner justice claimed

    The Twister's gentleman
    Loved to blow her cozy cove
    Hitting those ports of call
    But her love was free for all

    Deep motion oceans rolled
    His lover in accord
    His baby,
    Way ahead
    Wind stalled them
    Both in bed

    Lost her now
    She's astray...
    Run off with Hurricane

    Money keeps them at bay
    Too bad,
    They spin that way

    High maintenance
    Risky dame
    Upsetting,
    Homeboyz thing well

    Rough water
    Better days,
    Who needs a hurricane



    Darryl Omari :(
    aka 1poetsought ~ copyright 2004
     
  2. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    yo darryl...
    how did you know i knew this strong gale?
    she made me bail cause all she wanted was
    late night ale with chip and dale...:lol:

    your scribes are always right to the point....i like that
    word
    one love
    khasm
     
  3. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you, Brother Khasm
    This here one's for you!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    U made this so easy yet rough & tough
    u really need it but better days ahead
    i like how u drop this one..................
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A twister like this needs to keep on rolling. Liked your use of metaphor here poet.
     
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