Black Poetry : Hungry Heart

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  1. kidkhuti33

    kidkhuti33 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes its true
    within my mind
    I think of you
    So many things you bring when you come to me
    Your lips bring the winds of truth
    Your eyes capture me and potray the most beautiful scene
    In your heart you carry honor, courage and victory
    In your stride you embodies strength
    In your touch I feel a thousand exploding stars

    Embrace, Embrace, Embrace

    In my mind, close my eyes all I can see is your face.
    When Im alone I can sense you near.
    Smell your scent, feel your warmth, is that your voice I hear?

    Its true, I crave you.
    I can feel my hunger growing, expanding and demanding more!!!

    Send me out, a cast away unto your shores.

    I feel you, growing inside of me.
    You can feel my hungry energy, seeking you out and making it known.
    Even the universe sent me signs to be shown.

    I know it and I will see, I feel you propelling towards me.
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    From the first verse your words captured me.
    I enjoyed this beautiful flow! Thank you!


    feelin'itsouldeep!
    Coco:dance:
     
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    kidkhuti33 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks, the afroninja captured me.
     
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    Wow thats deep i can feel so much emotion in it i love this and you so much into it
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Beautifully scribed it was soul deep and felt within
    embrace the coming as it's near your pen speaks loud
    keep scribing I'm loving it
     
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