Black Poetry : ...hunger control...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LiLi, Oct 3, 2002.

  1. LiLi

    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Come into me
    Feelin the full strength of your forced cell union
    An intrusion into the 5th dimension
    Called pleasure intensity
    Minds set free
    Sweat and ecstasy the formula that
    …screams are built on
    …sighs stand on
    the precipice I jump from
    …when bodies shudder
    …when you swell from my toke
    and I swell under your stroke
    purely physical bumps
    (you feel me right? Cause ****…I’m sure the hell feelin you…)
    Kissin you
    Needin you
    Wantin you
    (****…your rotator cups are recitin a story…)
    You kiss me
    Need me
    Want me
    (my chocolate brother cry unto me…)
    what’s my name (!) quit playin
    I feel our worlds collapse into one another
    cinnamon glow is what I am at this moment
    skin red hot from your touch
    soft sweetness caress my neck then grab my ***
    pull me to you
    (my brother…take your time…I feel the same as you do…)
    Lungs explosive
    hearts propelled gifted to another space and time
    (twilight to dawn…getting it on…)
    you swear I’m drainin you
    my promise I’m freein you
    …your thirst
    my thirst
    …your hunger
    my hunger
    satiated at the end of this ride…
    our long ride into daylight my prince…
    On top
    down under
    brother crawl over
    Mm…your elixir’s got me uttering words in tongues
    …in rhyme
    this language unknown to me even in my dreams
    …losing time
    shot from a cannon
    your TNT rockets me through the cosmos
    I’m a
    …comet
    …shooting star
    Your words bring me back
    soft singing in my ear…
    “…your thirst
    my thirst
    …your hunger
    my hunger
    princess you got me spinnin…”
    butterfly kissin my back…(!?!)
    **** chocolate…you all that
    come into me…****…
     
  2. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    girl...you got me with this.......I be calling out your name LILI!!!!!
     
  3. LiLi

    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeaahhhh boy..say it again..****!

    LOL...i'm glad that i gotcha!! thanks for checkin it out!
     
  4. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    now, that's hottt, poetess. i'm lovin' it!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hummmm!! u drop da heat on me wit dis one
    and ya got me jumppin' up calling u 3x
    before i take flyte above it's all love gurl flow on !
     
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    Sunshyne Active Member MEMBER

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    That was like reading a book and loosing your self in it. The visual is almost automatic. You are very discriptive in the way you write. I am almost afraid to read somthing from you that may take me to some place dark and unfriendly because I know that were ever or whatever you are writing about will start to play like a movie on the screen. That's a good thing....Keep on doing it girl.

    Keep writing and inspiring others to do the same
     
  7. LiLi

    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm glad that you guys feel this...especially coming from such a telented group of people! i'm thinkin of using this for a show with just a soft drum rhythm...hmmm...
     
  8. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    ah, this exploded all over my screen

    now who's gonna fixed my sh*t LiLi

    LOL

    whoa

    nellie

    DSS
     
  9. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Like Yo FLo!

    You flo is nice--I wish I had read a few more--but I bounce in and out--well done--Amun-Ra

    :)
     
  10. Nia Maishani

    Nia Maishani Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Put yo' name in the annals, Poetess!

    Abysmally created...

    I'm feelin' every line.
    Rated: :spinstar::spinstar::spinstar::spinstar::spinstar:
     
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