Black Poetry : Humvee Ride a mslusciousb / 1poetsought joint

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Oct 3, 2003.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm alone in this world
    Mad pining your song
    Smitten...
    Want more,
    Please answer my calls

    Aren't you feelin' me?
    I can't do this alone
    Without you my queen
    No house is a home

    I'll wine and dine
    Be a stand up guy
    A thug,
    Capable of loving
    I'll walk the l-i-n-e

    Let a Humvee ride
    Sex your overdrive
    Then deliver the goods
    To my newly wed bride

    By the light of the moon
    Date a baby boom
    Celestial body
    Boo,
    Luscious love plume
    May I kiss it again
    Remix... the end
    Savor your flavor
    That scent ~
    We attend

    You desire and need
    To flourish in me
    I adore you girl
    Heed our family tree
    Hot oil back rubs
    In salty seas
    I can take you there
    Where lovers leap
    No love is complete
    Wanting love supreme
    I beseech you girl
    Come complete... the dream
    1poetsought ~ Copyright 2003

    Loving your seemingly thug ways.
    Counting the love for days.
    Nobody cares what I say.
    When I say I love you that way.
    Now I got mad love jones, from
    my hair follicles to my bones.
    My heart skips a beat when I
    hear your steps and your thug
    drum beat.
    I know you got your priorities
    straight.
    Cause you treated me like a
    queen when I asked you to
    wait.
    The longer we did anticipate.
    We knew we had entered
    loves heavenly gates.
    The time is right, your game
    is tight.
    You hold me close when we
    kiss goodnight.
    I jump at the sight of every
    Hummer on the street.
    Hoping when I gaze in the
    window it's your eyes I meet.
    I am loving this joining and
    meeting of the minds and
    loving how you look when
    I am coming up behind.
    You are the stars and the
    moon up above about you
    is everything that I love.
    Now I know that I made
    the right choice when I
    fell in love at the sound of
    your voice.
    BJS (C)2003
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    go on work those pens...
    i like...
     
  3. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's a pleasure rubbing poetic shoulders with you...

    As we stand side by side ready to enjoy the luxury and the ruggedness of this Humvee ride, I look at you with adoration and pride, cause I was ya Bonnie and you was my Clyde....with everything that I have inside! I must say it with a purr in your ear and with womanly pride, so glad to have you shoulder to shoulder by my side!
    This was exhilirhating for me....I hope it was good for you....LOL:geek: :luvv:
    LOVINGLY POETICALLY ESTACTICALLY YOURS!

    BLESSINGS ON YOUR HOUSE!
     
  4. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ya'll did ya thing on this...lovin' it...
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!
    y'all done blew it up in here
    i am loving it
    my brutha & sistah put da love's smack down
    WOWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    let da ink run
     
  6. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    word.......
    let da humvee glide...:)
    peace
    khasm
     
  7. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lets ride
    lets ride all nite lol :)
    flow on
    Mzblkangel and 1poet :)
     
  8. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Roll With Us

    Was it good for you
    Like is was for me
    Benefitting love
    For the sake of
    Our needs?

    Help us celebrate
    Sending us a holla
    Love's demand is great
    We've supplied the drama


    Thank you mslusciousb,
    & thank you too,
    Destee family
    :heart:
     
  9. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow...you guys have great writing chemistry
    nice concept...


    an even nicer ryyyyyyyyyyyyde!
     
  10. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    much love for this...a sweet collabo
     
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