Black Poetry : Hump Day (An Ubzorbshun and Reason Collab)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Reason, Oct 23, 2002.

  1. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I just don't feel like
    Workin today
    Wish I was at home under the covers
    With you or at the park
    Slow strollin just thankin bout
    Nothing

    No phones
    No hussle
    No hassle

    Man I just don't feel
    Like work today I wish I
    Was on a tropical island
    Just me and the sun as nekkit
    As could be

    No drama
    No worries
    No interruptions

    I don't feel like dealing
    With the trappings and
    Expectations of massanem
    I'd rather be cuddled up in
    Front of a fire with your finger
    Combing my hair the smell of love
    Thick in the air

    No ends to meet
    No loose ones to tie
    No deadlines

    I don't feel like workin
    today

    To the point that it hurts
    I swear I don’t wanna go to work
    I’d rather go to you
    Religiously like church
    And pray that God would
    Pleeze let me feel your spirit
    And just maybe we could
    Dance together…

    Cause I
    Don’t need these mutha phucka’s
    All ova my back
    Tryin to make sure im still pretendin
    To do this work ****

    **** I…
    Really don’t feel like working this job
    But I’d take a part time
    If It’d blow your mind
    No worries
    You wouldn’t have to work too hard
    All you gotta do is
    Relax and “let it go”

    That’s betta than
    “Fax this file”
    Or
    “Make me 25 copies of this”
    Stressing ? just to earn my money

    Hell I’d

    Rather chill at home
    And have ‘honey’
    From her
    And tell stories about
    Tropical islands
    And daydream
    The only ‘deadline’ being
    My telephone
    Please don’t call me
    Cause tomorrow I’m
    Stayin home
     
  2. elayne.

    elayne. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    soulsistah lil bit. & brickhead.


    see!? i'm g'on haveta agree wit sherrie.
    then mofo's wonder why "massanem" be
    restrictin' internet priviledges & ****! (LOL)

    but on dha real... this was madd tyght!!
    what y'all g'on write tomorrow?? :D

    itsallLove, chirens!

    elayne.
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    look at y'all hookin' it up on da paid job....see i can get
    into dis stuff keep it up !
     
  4. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    man

    like we da only one's be surfin and thangs.... we all be sneakin up in here to get our read on!!!!!!!




    ***typing response and looking to make sure they ain't lookin at me:D ***



    One
     
  5. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yo two of my favorites

    yo reading this piece made my feel like a got away for a day

    definitely heartfelt poets

    4real
     
  6. LiLi

    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i've been feeling like this all **** week!!! lol

    nice collabo!!
     
  7. lpoet

    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice Collab

    as long as you keep writtin im gonna keep reading
     
  8. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I's most definitely feelin this piece
    and dig'n the way you both put it down.


    Butta :heart:
     
  9. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks

    for the :heart:
     
  10. Euphoria

    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I felt this way a hundred times over.
    Thanks for putting it into words.
    *Emma*
     
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