Black Poetry : Human Lollipop (Haiku)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Afridancr, Oct 25, 2001.

  1. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    unwrap chocolate stick

    lick :tongue: until I reach center

    lap :x: sweet cream filling
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wooooweeee!!!

    hot spot jumped !
    ya working dis one here....:)
     
  3. James Eta

    James Eta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ooh,

    the visions here....whew!

    J
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oooooooooh my!

    Wonderful piece, great visualization!
    keep the flow!
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Look at you...

    Durty lil gurl...lol

    Keep it hot
    Reas
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Afri,

    Now what exactly are we talk'n' bout heah? :laugh:

    There's alotta heat in these 3 lines
    This sizzzzzzles in a cool way;)

    Madd Sistahly Love :heart:
    CCBSKYN
     
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    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    ooouuuuuuu Afridancr !!!! :eeek:

    i read this the first time, didn't have time to respond
    had to go back and find it ... ooooooouuuu Afridancr!!

    hehehehe

    luv it!
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the images...

    conjured up by the title of this.:)

    i wasn't disappointed by the center of this...piece.

    got me jumping around up in hea.
     
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