Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by sweettee29, Sep 22, 2006.
thanks for reading while it was posted
word up !
love is one thing to write but to do in da raw can leave a bag to carry til death
what happens before sound good and during the maze feels good but after leaves
a living pain forever .
let it be known sis let it be heard throughout in awareness of A.I.D.S
I'm too well aware of the after-effects, as it struck in my family.
True...it carries a name, a very deadly one. this piece really stirred emotions in me. Awesome piece poet, If just one person heeds to it, would be a swell thing.
Whoever don't believe the big "A" will wipe you out ...click below.
$$RICH$$ AND QUEEN I THANK YOU FOR YOUR RESPONSE TO MY PIECE AND I AM GLAD THAT YOU COULD FOLLOW IT. I HAVE LOST ONE COUSIN TO AIDS AND ANOTHER IS DYING I AM SICK, SICK, SICK AND TIRED OF OUR BEAUTIFUL PEOPLE DYING BECAUSE OF ONE STUPID NIGHT OF PLEASURE
It was kind of like a soap opera which got me hooked I confess! Then the hit at the end wakes you up from that alternate reality and brings you back to reality. Keep creating and keep letting your mind venture to these deep places that is where you find the hidden art.
AMIN I WILL TAKE YOUR ADVICE ON CREATION, I AM GLAD YOU FELT THIS PIECE.
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