Black Poetry : Huh?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Reason, Oct 14, 2002.

  1. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Would we still be making love if
    I lay stagnant inside of you
    Careful not to move
    Allowing you only to
    Vibe off my pulse
    While sitting as deep as can be
    Or would it really matter
    As long as I still made you
    'Run to me'?

    Would we still be making love if
    We did it in silence
    No Oooh's or Aaahhh's
    No soft name calls
    Only staring into each others eyes
    And
    Reading one another's minds
    Becoming one...
    In a Shhhh~
    That was noisy enuff
    To allow us to hear ourselves
    Cum in a Hush

    Would we still be making love if we
    Lay naked in a glass tub
    Surrounded by candles &
    Tulips
    Only parting our 2 lips
    For kissing and conversation
    Our intercourse being totally mental
    Then again,
    Would it really matter as long as we
    'Came' to an understanding
    That our Sex(u)al(i)ty supercedes
    The physical

    Would we still be making love if
    We continually changed the pace
    From soft & slow
    To
    Fast and enjoyably painful
    As long as it was kept thorough
    And we generated sweats that
    Kept our friction from sticking
    Or would it really matter as long
    As we rode each other's pulse
    Until it put us both to sleep

    Would we still be making love if I
    Left my boots on
    Or
    U left on a high-heeled shoe or 2
    Could we still possess the
    Innocence we have if we used
    Costumes
    Would it really matter
    As long as you were making love to me
    And I to you

    Would we still be making love
    If we tried every possible angle &
    Still tried to create a few new
    Or
    Made our mark in ever~y location
    That we would physically or mentally
    Travel to
    Would you really care as long as
    You were there with me
    And I was there with you
    Would we still be making love?


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    Reason's Love 2K2
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man reason i bet she say yes!!!
    dis was tyght how love was made in hush
    and how one can cum in silent without da ahhhh!
    as minds enterwined by thoughts in da eyes
    of each other romantic motions flows ....
     
  3. elayne.

    elayne. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    brickhead.


    ooooo... imma tell!! :lol:

    but if you askin' me... nah... imma leave that
    alone. hahaha you are a mess!! ...but as
    always... i'm feelin' ya flow, dah-lin'!

    itsallLove, chile.

    elayne.
     
  4. DIIMOND

    DIIMOND Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW!!!!!

    Reas my friend...
    you know... ur poems keep getting better and better!!!!
    oooooooo weeeeee!!!!
    that was some real stuff said and some real stuff I'd like 2 try..
    I betta behave huh?
    Perfect flow Babe..:hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :flamet: :flamet:
     
  5. Gaylee

    Gaylee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am with $$RICH$$, she'll say yes, and Diimond too, I can see going there too. Reason this was GOOD!
     
  6. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *bowing*
     
  7. Desert Storm

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    Very intimate and inclusive well i liked it
    D
     
  8. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Would I still be readin this with my mouth

    all open talkin bout oooohhhh weeee ... Twin, you got down for yours on this one here. I ain't tellin momma nothing cause sherrie and layne the one be teaching us this kinda stuff. You know I'm diggin this one here fo sho. It's up there with she read me poetry and that otha one... you know the one you ain't posted.....





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  9. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was hot...i'd give it up my **** self...
     
  10. Destee

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    would we still be making love
    if my computer screen was all fogged up ??

    Whew !!!!!

    Wonderful Work Reason!

    :heart:

    Destee